Acoustic Sensitivity

...dream of Cho Chang being your gf but suddenly you realize she is just a fiction character. :( LOL!

Chorus doesn't have to be long and repeating, the same as for lyrics. Also you can have it as bridge then chorus. Well in this case I did have a ...

Someone should really continue on with the HP Universe. Well someone could write a story before the events of the 7 books (Maybe about the childhood of Dumbledore) or a ...

It was nice. Even though it was short it was meaningful. I like how you talk about the meaningless of war. Just one suggestion, try to put more details and ...

Try to put some spaces between the stanzas so it could be read properly.

It's a nice song but it's like it is meant to be fast. It's like a rap song. It kind of reminds of Linkin Park.

Arrange your lines and put at least a space within the dialogue because it's kind of hard to read. Also put a margin on the first lines of each paragraph. ...

Wow, Your poem is very...I don't know...heartwarming? But really it looks like it came straight from the heart. It was simple but the message and your feelings is here.

I'm not much of a fan of pop songs but yours was good. The hey baby seemed like a cliche though but still it was good.

It sounds good. The line flows well. It reminds me a little of Incubus. I don't know why.

The words flow well. This would sound good as a song. Though the words were not that impressive but it sounds okay.

This is kind of flat and doesn't give enough emotions. Also if you ever try giving it music it would sound dull. It would be like rap. But still it ...

Yeah I agree it needs a lot of work especially the first verse. I think it doesn't flow rhythmically enough. The chorus was good but seem cliche. It gives a ...

I agree with Suzanne. Your message is good but since it's just statements it doesn't move people that much. I think it would be better if you write about a ...

Thanks mate! And yes, this is original. I made this up myself and so are my other songs.